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 # English
 
-Awoken / My eyes still seeing dreams
+Awoken, my eyes still seeing dreams
 
-Melting the darkness like mixed pigments
+The darkness melts away like a blending pigment
 
-My screaming heart is searching for light / My sunken eyes shut
+Searching for light, my beating heart screams out, and my sinking eyes closed.
 
 Ah, being born in this world is just fate they say.
 
 Every time I try to make my mark, it's just forgotten, and those hands
 
-clasped together. Crack your shell.
+clasped together, and drill through my shell
 
 In a helix, two strings twine together,
 
 and pull together, weaving the story of a dichromatic pair.
 
-In a small crack, the flowing light... / Shut eyes looked away.
+Through the fracturing gap, a light shines through,
+
+and shut eyes looked away.
 
 Ah, being alive in this world is no mistake they say.
 
 Even if it's just something I say to myself, my forgotten heart responds...
 
-for a moment would be fine.
+though just for a moment would be fine.
 
 Ah, being born in this world is just fate they say.