improve translation of zero-g

translations/other/zerog.mdwn

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ song in it anyway.
 
 無重力の このおもい
 
-答えは見つかって ここにあるから
+答えはいつだってここにあるから
 
 どこまでもゆこう
 
@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ song in it anyway.
 
 読んでいる遠い声
 
-どこにいく
+突破にいく
 
 今どこにいいよ
 
-「機能」が超えて
+「機能」を超えて
 
 「銀河」が向けて
 
@@ -67,13 +67,13 @@ song in it anyway.
 
 流星のように
 
-期限なくて
+消えなくて
 
 形成なくて
 
 折りかけると動き出す星
 
-とどかない
+たわめない
 
 つかめない
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ song in it anyway.
 
 常識を飛び越えて
 
-イメージの向こうのへ
+イメージの向こうもへ
 
 誰も知らない 秘密だよ
 
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ song in it anyway.
 
 迷い込む深い場所
 
-どこにいく
+突破にいる
 
 今ここにいいよ
 
@@ -105,88 +105,88 @@ song in it anyway.
 
 「明日」を飛べて
 
-今、走りですよ
+今、走り出すよ
 
 願い込めて
 
 # English
 
-Even with eyes wide open, nothing can be seen
+Even with eyes wide open, nothing can be seen,
 
-If you close your eyes, where will be the star
+where are the stars when I close my eyes?
 
 Incomprehensible and unheard,
 
-but still I understand the light
+but still one can understand the light -
 
-Cut the darkness to pieces
+Cutting straight through the eternal dark,
 
-Going beyond the higher dimensions
+and going beyond higher dimensions -
 
-This weight on my shoulders feels like Zero-G
+This weight on my shoulders feels like Zero-G,
 
-Searching for the answer, but it's right here
+because the answer was always right here
 
-I can go anywhere
+I can go anywhere,
 
-Even the sky
+even the sky.
 
-Searching for my diety
+Searching for my diety,
 
-A never ending quest
+a never ending quest,
 
-A distant voice calls
+and a distant voice calls -
 
-Where do I go?
+I'm going further beyond,
 
-Where should I go now?
+so where do I go now?
 
-Cross over to tomorrow
+Cross over to tomorrow,
 
-Turn towards the galaxy
+and turn towards the galaxy -
 
-Soon I'll meet you
+Soon I'll meet you,
 
-Like a shooting star
+like a shooting star.
 
-Timeless,
+Unending,
 
-Formless,
+formless,
 
-Fracturing into bits, the star moves
+fracturing into bits, the star moves -
 
-Can't get through
+Unbending,
 
-Can't grasp it
+and uncatchable,
 
-A world on one's chest
+a world within one's heart.
 
-Break the barrier of common sense
+Breaking the barriers of common sense,
 
-Opposing the image
+and opposing our very impressions of this world -
 
-A secret known by nobody
+A secret known by nobody -
 
-Reality and fantasy, in one's hands
+Reality and fantasy, right in my hands,
 
-Hold it tightly
+I hold on to it tightly.
 
-To the limits of your dreams
+To the limits of our dreams.
 
-Finding out, certainly a diety
+I've found them, certainly a diety -
 
-Awakening this avatar
+awakening this avatar,
 
-Losing oneself deeply here
+wandering deep into this place.
 
-Where do I go?
+I am the further beyond now,
 
-For now, here's good
+so for now, here is good.
 
-Throw away yesterday
+I throw away yesterday,
 
-And fly towards the future
+fly towards the future,
 
-This is just the beginning
+and break into a run,
 
-To put into wishes
+enshrouded in wishful thought.